This is the author's first book. In the words of a sharp complaining master in the QQ group, the author has stepped on all the poisonous points that newcomers can step on. .
From the beginning I wanted to write it myself, but now enthusiastic book friends in the QQ group have put forward many sharp and useful suggestions.
Therefore, the author chose to rewrite the outline.
This book has passed its final chapter, and in the last few chapters, there have been many issues that the author did not take into consideration when conceiving.
First, the system seriously affects the plot of the story.
The powerful system dominates the scene, and although the author barely controls it, he still decides to downplay the existence of the system.
Here, I would like to apologize to book friends who like the system. It’s my lack of writing skills that ruins the reader’s enjoyment.
Secondly, the response to the chapter on cutting faces far exceeded the author's imagination.
Because of the expansion of system attributes, the author tried to use the writing method of first suppressing and then increasing to limit the growth of charm value, which resulted in serious dissatisfaction among book friends.
This is because I was unclear about the positioning of this book and did not take into account the emotional investment of many book friends. I sincerely apologize here again.
After that, I will gradually eliminate the negative effects of face cutting and give up the restrictions on the charm value of the system.
Maybe the protagonist's super good looks will become a bug or poisonous point in the book's follow-up.
But this was a fundamental flaw in my initial outline design that I could do nothing about and was not prepared to resist.
As the saying goes, whatever you make an appointment with, you have to finish it with tears in your eyes.
Thirdly, Brother Shangshan who will appear in the Echizen chapter will become Sister Shangshan. This is the most important reason for this major change in the outline.
Book friends in the QQ group warned me that if I installed a penis on Sister Shangshan, I might encounter a situation where my face was cut off.
I admit, I'm scared.
Sometimes it’s quite interesting to think about it. Others wrote that Japan’s Warring States period was all men, and there was a top-shirted sister.
I wrote about the Warring States Period in Japan where all the women were women, and there was a brother who was wearing a shirt.
This incident made me a little frustrated, but I was even more afraid of a recurrence of the wave of criticism for the chapter "The Cutting of Faces".
I was a fragile child, and I just wanted to write an interesting book that everyone would enjoy rather than get scolded.
Finally, I would like to thank my book friends for their enthusiasm. With your participation, I can write with such vigor.
Bow and thank you.
