I have something to do today and need to take a day off. Then I want to ask the brothers about improving the content of the book.
Because the content of this book was not well arranged, many brothers left after supporting the content.
I am also reflecting on this issue myself.
Entering the NBA is like changing the map.
At first, I only thought about the time when Michael Jordan retired and the protagonist also performed well and became the "new king" of the league. However, I ignored that once Jordan left, most fans were not familiar with this era, and there was even less to watch. .
And my usual writing style seems a bit procrastinating. I am used to burying some small foreshadowings to make the subsequent plot more ups and downs.
But there is no big boss in the early stage, resulting in a very flat rhythm.
In order to better exercise my storytelling skills, I specifically chose a less prominent plug-in.
As a result, the climax of 52 points and chasing the rampant Karl Malone could not support the content of this period.
So the writing style of the last two chapters has been changed. As you can see, I have covered all the pre-game atmosphere and so on. The main purpose is to write about a series of games from a general direction. I would like to ask you how you feel after reading it. A bit of a running story.
In fact, I want to add some daily content, but because the big climax points can't be supported at present, and the small exciting points are not exciting enough because there are not so many well-known players in this era. So I never dared to write about my daily life.
Or is the pacing problem something that can be resolved with more updates?
Brothers, please tell me what is the biggest problem now and what you want to see. I will collect your thoughts and then I will update it.
