Fan Keqin continued: "Use lies to verify lies, and what you get must be lies. So whether it is life or justice that is verified under conspiracy, is it really justice? If Director Zhan wants to express something similar If you think about it, I think this door is still too abrupt. There is no prefix at all in the whole article. It just comes suddenly at the end, which is a bit too... dry. It feels very reckless. This is my opinion. , I hope Director Zhan doesn’t mind.”
The company boss Zhang Shan was a little surprised because he really didn't know that Fan Keqin knew about movies. Anyway, I know better than myself. Before this, he actually read the script of Dead Game, and he found it quite interesting. But when I heard what Fan Keqin said, I felt, well, that seems to be what happened.
Zhan Ruide digested it for a while, and after Fan Keqin finished speaking, he did feel quite uncomfortable. After all, I created the script myself, and now that someone is saying that, I naturally feel uncomfortable. But for the same reason, this guy is a very pure director and really wants to deliver a good film. Therefore, he asked: "This script has not been completely finalized yet. Teacher Wan, can you give me some more specific opinions?" , how do you think it should be changed? Or, in which direction should it be changed?"
Fan Keqin observed the other party's expression, and he understood that Zhan Ruide seemed to be really asking him for advice humbly. So he lit a cigarette, thought for a while, and said: "First of all, we need to set the general tone of this story. I think the concept of the deadlock is okay. The conspiracy is mixed with some human thoughts. Then it is sealed The setting of the space can also be completely retained. This is a genius idea.
But the way the characters appear can be modified. After all, the movie Director Zhan wants is a horror-type movie. So how can you catch people’s attention in the first place? It becomes more important to give the audience a sense of involvement. I think we can reset the way the characters appear.
For example, the doctor and the detective wake up in the water room of a closed, abandoned slaughterhouse. One is on the far left side of the room and one is on the far right side of the room. But when they woke up, they found that they were completely locked by metal chains. Then, they found a corpse lying face down on the floor in the middle of the water room with a hole in its head. A revolver was not far from the corpse's right hand.
As soon as it opens, it will completely catch the audience's attention and give the audience an excellent sense of immersion..."
Fan Keqin talked about the settings and modifications at the beginning. Zhan Ruide's eyes lit up and he nodded repeatedly, saying: "Yes, that's good. After all, this is a thriller and horror film, and the beginning is very important. This is indeed very attractive, but Teacher Wan The murderer was deleted and it became a confrontation between two 'good guys'. Well, it's more interesting this way. But without one person, the plot will probably be weaker due to convenience."
"No." Fan Keqin said: "We can set up various links throughout the film to arouse the audience's emotions. In addition, I did not delete the murderer, he still exists."
"Ah?" Zhan Rednahan said: "Oh, by the way, there is a dead man on the ground, so there is a murderer outside this water house. I don't know when he will come in, right? This is more conducive to suspense. manufacture."
"Hey!" How should I put it? Fan Keqin felt that the other party's thinking was indeed okay. But the movie I was talking about turned into two different stories. How is that possible? If not, I wouldn't be able to copy the original version of my soundtrack. Therefore, Fan Keqin began to follow the temptation and said: "No, in fact, this murderer is the dead man with a blooming head. He gave himself a sedative, which made his heartbeat and pulse beat very weak.
However, I can see from your reaction that the modification was successful if I set it up this way. Because you haven't guessed it, it's naturally impossible for the audience to guess it.
My idea is that after this scene is shown at the beginning of the movie, the two people who are locked up start introducing themselves to each other and trying to figure out a way out. Then in this closed space, various hints and clues are set up. The two people assisted each other, discussed with each other, and through the same clues, it seemed that they had been actively looking for a way to really get out..."
That's right, the script Fan Keqin mentioned is actually a famous series of horror thrillers in later generations called Saw. This horror film is definitely famous among horror film fans. All kinds of suspense, various clues, conflicts, rhythm, and the final big twist will definitely make horror movie lovers scream for excitement.
The script is a three-part structure that is a collection of commercial films. It was also the best narrative structure of commercial films that was summarized by the world until Fan Keqin traveled through time in later generations. In every paragraph, there must be ups and downs. So Fan Keqin just told the general plot. After the final words, Zhan Ruide was already very excited. Although the script seems to have been changed beyond recognition, it is undoubtedly more exciting to shoot it like Fan Keqin said. In addition, the basic settings are still my own creativity.
He is like this, let alone Zhang Shan. After listening to it, I felt so comfortable. good! good! My company is indeed about to turn around. After Fan Keqin finished speaking, Zhan Ruide had already taken the pen and paper, and was discussing with Fan Keqin to fill in the content of each segment, such as what clues should be given to several people in the story. Then after discovering the clues, how can we create suspense and so on.
In the end, Zhang Shan heard two people discussing and using electric speakers and gramophones to completely create a murderer with a very strong IQ. Finally, he closed the door. When the game ended, the feeling was simply thrilling.
After the discussion was over, Zhan Ruide also showed a smile on his face and said: "I really appreciate Teacher Wan's guidance. I have learned a lot, and there are still some details. I will go back and revise it. I believe it will be completed in a few days. I’ll trouble Teacher Wan again when the time comes.”
"I don't dare take it." Fan Keqin said with a smile: "If you need it, come to me anytime."
"Okay, then I won't disturb Teacher Wan." Zhan Ruide said and stood up. Only then did he remember that the company's boss, Zhang Shan, was still there. So he said: "Boss, can you send a car to take me back? I want to revise the script right away..."
