This was originally a request for leave chapter.
I haven't rested for a long time and want to rest for two days.
I was also a little confused and wanted to avoid the limelight.
Because how to say it.
Writing about a person who is different from ordinary people, I think the reader's reaction should be curiosity and a desire to explore.
For example, Huang Jinmo actually broke the life limit of Shenlin and lived more than 900 years, but she was still in Shenlin realm. This should be quite dramatic.
What I thought was the reader's reaction was - ah, why? Was there any story? So curious!
But the reaction I saw was - the writing collapsed again! He's over 900 years old and doesn't even have a hole! Is Huang Jinmo a waste?
That's about it.
Brother Sun sent me a red envelope today. Let me stop him and say, don't comfort me. This will make me look weak.
Some alliance leaders suggested in private chat that if Ah Shen writes this kind of plot in the future, he could put a preview at the end, for example, what on earth is Zhuang Gaoxian thinking? How could Jiang Wang be injured? Why is the Mo family like this? Please come and see it on time tomorrow.
This way people might not complain.
But I think... is this still interesting to read?
I confidently told him that it was okay, I would finish writing this plot later. The controversy is gone. I won't be affected.
But as I sit here now, I really don’t know how to write.
I sat there all day.
I can't figure it out.
Indeed, recently I have been working hard to hide in this world. I've always done this, responded to controversy with effort.
I think I have really devoted myself wholeheartedly. As a player who can do 4,000 times a day, being able to update 8,000 times a day means that I have cut off my own time for exercise, cooking, daze, and chatting with friends. I order takeout every now and then these days and hardly ever go out with others.
I confirm that I am writing this paragraph very seriously.
But it is indeed controversial.
I think I will seriously discuss the plot design during this period with you to see what the problems are.
Today's chapter has almost completed the plot line, so there will be no spoilers, so it can indeed be discussed.
First of all, Chu Yuzhi’s line is a concrete manifestation of the national contradictions in Chu State, so there is the scene where he cuts off the seats at the meeting house. That is a plot that makes Chu State more three-dimensional.
At the same time, Xiao Shu's foreshadowing was laid in Chu Yuzhi's place.
Therefore, there is a plot of stealing pills and coming to the city of no redemption, and spending forty days to attack the gods.
Xiao Shu and Zhang Xun should have written about it, and also sketched out a country like Danguo. At the same time, the pattern of countries in the world was further clarified.
Jiang Wang's character determines that he will collect Xiao Shu's body.
Next comes the controversial part.
Zhu Weiwo's character is very proud. He became a god and wanted to kill Du Ruhui. Because Du Ruhui was so far away, he often traveled around, and Du Ruhui must be very aware of Jiang Wang's threat. Because of these two points, he may be plotting against Jiang Wang——
This is the basis for Zhu Weiwo's plan to ambush Du Ruhui.
The article expressly hints at Yi Shengfeng's investigation of Jiang Wang many times. Including stopping the road to ask Taiyin, of course he would not miss the information from Zhuang Guo, so he also communicated with Zhuang Guo... When he was being hunted everywhere, he chose to do something for himself Prepare, hand it over to Zhuang Guo, and let the enemy's enemies help him hold the enemy back. Of course, it is better to kill him - this is Yi Shengfeng's line of logic.
The Yong Kingdom sent Mo Jingyu here to recruit Xiao Shu. Here is a little profile of Han Xu. The reason why Mo Jingyu was sent instead of other gods was because Buhu City was a lawless place after all, and Du Ruhui was so far away, so sending others could easily lead to trouble. Mo Jingyu's background in the Mo family also makes him relatively safe here - this is Han Xu's line of logic.
Zhuang Gaoxian and Du Ruhui's ideas are very clear in this chapter, they just want to get rid of Zhu Weiwo. They failed miserably in the demon-tong case. Jiang Wang can no longer have any ideas in a short time. But I can’t get rid of Zhu Wei, who has already arrived. It will be even more troublesome if he hugs Chu’s lap in the future. They are both overlords, and Chu is closer than Qi.
They are not the kind of boss who will sit still and wait for players to level up and get equipment before gaining experience. They have always been ambitious, courageous, clear-minded and ruthless. They also stole the elixir of the White Bone Evil God, fought a national war with the Yong Kingdom after becoming a real person, Jiang Wangdu won the championship on behalf of the Qi Kingdom, and they still created a demon... These are all continuations of their behavioral patterns.
They originally designed a very strict conspiracy, but during the implementation process, they suddenly discovered that Mo Jingyu had arrived. New ideas are generated and implemented immediately. This kind of ability and decision-making to seize opportunities is something they do have.
In the process of getting rid of Zhu Weiwo, Du Ruhui first made Zhu Weiwo make a mistake in his judgment, so he really wanted to get Jiang Wang. But he didn't want to cause trouble, after all, he had just been beaten in Yujing Mountain. Therefore, this matter must be Lin Zhengren and Du Yehu's own initiative. Whether it succeeds or fails, there is no loss. But success or failure will be a test for Lin Zhengren and Du Yehu. It is a test for these two people at the same time.
——These are the logical lines of Zhuang Gao and Du Ruhui.
Lin Zhengren had no choice. Lin Zhengren had to show his worth, otherwise he would be killed. Because he has been proven to be a person without loyalty, all he needs to prove after the Yellow River Meeting is his worthiness. Therefore, he must achieve something in this ambush. So he is also working hard to calculate. As for his battle layout ability, I think the Yellow River Society has already demonstrated it, or even described it even earlier, during the Three Cities Theory Period - this is Lin Zhengren's line of logic.
Du Yehu had no choice. Du Yehu had to prove his loyalty, so as soon as Lin Zhengren came to test, he immediately took action. If he was slower, he would die. As for why he stayed in Zhuang Kingdom, it should have been described in the "Tiger Minister" chapter in the Difficult Journey Volume (In addition, I thought it would arouse some emotions when I heard about Zhao Er's death, but I didn't expect that few people cared. , maybe it’s really too long, plus I can’t write it in detail) – this is Du Yehu’s line of logic.
Jiang Wang left Chu State and came to Buhu City, firstly to chat with Zhu Weiwo, and secondly because he wanted to fight Yi Shengfeng for life and death. Yi Shengfeng had no chance in the Southern Territory, and he had no chance either.
After encountering Du Yehu's ambush, he had no choice. He had to cooperate with the show, otherwise Du Yehu would die. So he frequently stepped on Lin Zhengren's designs.
There is a very obvious hint in the original text - "Jiang Wang treats this battle with the utmost calmness. He knows that he cannot make mistakes in every step. Any mistake may cause regrets in this life!"
I think this sentence is enough to prove that Jiang Wang's acting is not about making up for it after the fact.
So with the military formation composed of Du Yehu's blood-drinking magical power + evil tiger evil + three hundred nine Jiang Xuanjia + the intelligence and countermeasures provided by Yi Shengfeng (mainly the method to suppress Jiang Wang's perception of danger, this will be discussed later) Expand) + Ten Thousand Ghosts Soul Devouring Formation + Hundred Ghosts’ Day-Traveling Magical Power + Lin Zhengren’s desperate battle layout + Jiang Wang’s own situation of stepping into pitfalls step by step.
Can Jiang Wang be injured?
I never wrote that the inner palace cannot break the defenses of the outer building, right? This is not an online game. Jiang Wang's defense is 999, and Du Yehu's sword is 777, so the defense is not broken and the blood is not reduced.
How did Jiang Wang faint? After beheading Du Yehu to death, he deliberately found the wrong hiding place of Lin Zhengren, and then left quickly because he was worried about Du Ruhui's appearance... and then encountered Du Ruhui's Heavenly Breathing Technique + River and Mountain Thorn.
After he discovered Zhu Weiwo, he strengthened his injuries a little and tried his best to fight, and then seriously injured Shen Mian. It was Du Ruhui who made him like this.
——This is Jiang Wang’s line of logic.
The whole logic goes smoothly, so many people's threads come together, and this plot happens.
Frankly speaking, I don't know where it is.
If you want to talk about the abuse of the master, in my outline, this is the last chapter in this volume. (In addition, every time I write the last chapter, I get sprayed. There is really no time like this.)
If you say there is a problem with logic, what is the problem with logic?
If you think there is something wrong with the author's attitude, I am a 4,000-word contestant who updates 8,000 words a day. I only eat, sleep and write. I have reached my limit.
When I write any plot in the future, do I have to write a first, then b, then c, then d, write all aspects, and then write abcd after the collision?
Does anyone really like to watch it?
After Xiao Shu's story line ended.
I want to write about Zhuang Guo first, then about Yi Shengfeng, then about intelligence acquisition, and then about mobilizing troops to ambush... Is this how I should write it?
So when Jiang Wang was ambushed, was there really any drama?
What kind of story do you want to read, and how do you want the author to write it?
Let’s all speak freely, and there’s no need to hold it back.
Of course, after today's chapter, you can no longer hear these scoldings. Now everyone is scolding the Mo family for being such idiots and being deceived by Zhuang Gaoxian.
But the plot line of the Mo family cannot be wrapped up now. The whole story has not reached that plot stage yet.
Even if I gritted my teeth and updated it every day for a while, it would be impossible to give an answer. (Of course I can’t do it anymore.)
So there is nothing I can do.
Yes, I can't help it.
As an author, it is undoubtedly a shame to open a single chapter to explain your plot.
But I really have no choice.
I thought that by writing as fast and well as I could, and gritting my teeth, I could solve this problem. But the entire logic of the plot of Wangzi being beaten has been written, and now it’s time to start the inkjet family idiot.
Can I risk the collapse of the outline and write about all the Mohists first?
I can not.
I can only take the plot line that has been temporarily completed and ask you——
What do you want to see?
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